Tuesday 18 February 2014

Posting Plot~

I'll decided to make a few alteration to the storyline of my doujin novel, Helferis. I'd noticed that the first work was a bit tight on the haste level and it's basically too fast pace but no worries because I will redo it.
Well, who are there to be worried except for me , right?..huhu..*forever alone in my blog*
I will post the bit's of plot in Arc 1 thus far. I will divided the whole section of the story into Arc, just like how they do it in the long running anime like One Piece, Bleach, Naruto e.t.c. This below are what is completed as of now. I will update this post as soon as it is complete.

Plot Point Of Arc 1
-Hero coming into town, killing bunch of looter with extreme bloody result
-The town is overridden with immense evil at night. Oblivious to this fact, she kept staying there until the next morning, plunder has arrived in the shape of a man wielding a katana.
-Battle goes on, with neither were determined to incapable of killing one another : same power level. He leave the scene and acknowledging himself as Ka de Leonard before waving goodbye. Hero also stated her name and move onward back home after crashing almost every possible shop asking for information regarding her father. It was to no avail, and she returned to her staying place. In the next morning, she decided to ventured deeper into the town, and saved bunch of children from thieves in a dark corner. Those children are important, as they are enslaved by the leader of the corrupted gang within the area. Abuse and morality, and other real life issues are to become an effective theme starting onward.
-She managed to find a place to stay somehow, and wandered the night before encountering another person being mugged and this time, it was a girl known as Quell Tyia Hyme. She is unarmed and suggested herself to be lost, and wanted to stay together with the hero.
It was an unavoidable request, and Quell stayed at the hero’s temporary home.
-The next morning, Quell has gone missing and the hero stumbled back upon the children that she rescued earlier. Those children mentioned that they are earning money, in order to be sufficient for them to escape out of the city. Through acute observation, the hero has confirmed that the city is abundant with abandoned children that has no place to make a settlement. The two moves ahead right after the hero gave them the location of her staying place and told that they need to go there if they wanted to. They knocked as usual, and the hero advanced deeper into this thick black city that has not much of a wealthy home apart from the earlier stage of the city and the matter of prostitution and slaves are enlarged and sickening to the eyes. The hero saw a slave being hit and she rescued him and punched the owner with a deranged look. A lot of people are frightened and the boy that were saved ran away.
- Tyia Hyme appeared out of the blue thereafter, making up a excuses of she has gone beforehand to booked them a place to eat at a better side of the dark city. From there, they talked about many thing, and Tyia explained of a bad guys that ruled the territory, that were said to be very powerful and terrifying, and in control of one of the biggest human trafficking module throughout the whole continental, and speak of that her life might be in danger due to the fact that she has punched a man before. The hero spoke of no fear thought. A topic concerning an army association named S.O.L.A has been covered but that will be discussed in the storyline. The hero has crazy motive of wanting to asked the most powerful man in the city regarding of her father’s location, but it really served as a joke because she does not have the obligation to fight against him just for the city.
-They leave the premise but under attack by an assailant with huge retractable hammer as a weapon. His name is Mark Lancer. She fought him but was left opened at some part and Tyia inevitably get in the way and suffered from heavy injuries. The hero was mad and fight off against the guy, rendering him overwhelming damages as well before he decided to make a run for it.  Tyia and the hero make off to the hospital. Due to her new friend’s hospitalization, she drowned in grief and sorrow and vengeance, wanting to exact revenge but she still kept a cool head and went home because Tyia awakened suddenly and told her that she should forget it and go home. Her friend is still immobilized however and the hero make the trip back onward because she wanted to obeyed and have not such a stubborn characteristic.
- Back home, the children are there but they are crying because they are mugged once again. Once thing calmed down, they told the hero everything, concerning their ambition and a bit of fact about the main rival in the city that kidnapped most of the adult in the area and sold them to a faraway land, including their parent whom situation are undetermined. Teenager were also seized. The hero developed a lot more feeling of wanting to steer clear the land off the invading parade but most of the time, she was still unsure due to fear of taking risk.
-Mark Lancer that fought off the hero are showed kneeling before a man.
He was apologizing but the man refused to speak up and kicked him so strong that the person before him literally crashed into a wall that crumbled completely. This anonymous entity’s face was revealed later, with him looking as a young man with thin moustache and wearing a business suit. Mark Lancer recovered really quick and apologized, before stating that he will try to kill the hero once again. The business suit wearing man speak up and denied his request, stating that he would wanting to come after the target himself.
-On another day, the hero is standing beside Tyia’s bed, looking at the sleeping body.
Soon after, a guy came in inside the room and he acknowledge himself as Sir Richard Mortensen and told the hero that he is the man she was looking for. The hero was furious and they have a big fight outside of the building. It was quite a battle of feat, before Sir Richard has taken out the main hero by a fist to the cheek. He is a hand to hand combatant but he also armed with a knight’s sword, thought he never used it. He obtained  quite a damage however, but his expression was rarely changed from being standard during the course of battle. He threatened to do something that would put the hero is horror, and immediately moved to Tyia’s room.
The hero was furious and ran off after him, shocked to see the man is pointing a gun at the unconscious party. It was not a single alarm before he released the trigger. The girl was shot and the hero was devastated and fall down to her knee. Richard shot the hero as well in the head, and her awareness erased.
-The hero arise in a hospital room, at the same place where she has been at before. The two children that she knew, Eria and Phil, are crying beside the bed and are happy than it is to be seeing that the hero has put up resistance against death. The doctor are amazed of her resurrection as she was likely to be dead than alive, and yet managed to surpassed it and most of her wound are heal with a speed like no other. Once her mind is stabilized, she asked of the doctor about Tyia Hyme, and they told her that her death is imminent and her body was already carried off. The hero is furious, but the doctor told her that she should just leave town.
The doctor also spilled the beans regarding of the hospital stuff are under Mortensen’s control, and that they are ordered to throw the hero’s body into the dump but he (the doctor) didn’t do so since he is sick of following a madman. The hero thanked him, and she was send off to her home, along with Eria and Phil. From there, the hero thought up a discussion of her own, involving on her ambition to find Mortensen and punished him, not only for the death of her friend but due to liberating everybody else either way. The children didn’t disobeyed much, and the hero told them to stay put as she is readying her mentality and weaponry.
-Following the next day, she destroyed a lot of home belonging to the prostitution and slaving business, and there’s an abundant of offence but she fend them all off and succeed in making result of huge riot throughout the area all by herself. The battle between her and the other opposition resulted in a bloody mayhem as she is intended on taking down the entire district.
As time has passed, the hero has managed to gained intelligence concerning Richard’s hideout and thrashed it. As expected, the target was there. They talked a lot, before he called somebody. To the hero surprise, the person that comes was Quell Tyia Hyme.
-That person isn’t dead as the hero’s thought she did, and she speak of becoming another henchman for Richard. She gave explanation regarding herself being undercover in order to entrapped the hero, but failed to do so since the hero is hard to be pulled away. Thereafter, they wouldn’t talked anymore and Tyia began attacking. Their fight goes hard, and the hero learned a lot regarding of Tyia’s power. By the end of the chaos, the hero has won, but were inflicted with severe damages. Her enemy has fallen, remained immobilized for a moment.
(There’s a lot of hidden conversation between these characters during battle but it shall be mentioned in the actual storyline.)
-The hero wanting to take Richard down, but she is rendered almost useless due to injuries. Before she was almost killed by the main enemy, Tyia came forward, and managed to land a hit on her ex-boss. Pretty soon, a duo was formed, and they fight Richard together.
(It’s  a bit haste because I don’t want to go into too much detail here.)
At the end of the day, the enemy was defeated, and the hero has fainted, and Tyia’s glimpse was slowly missing from her vision.
-After a few days of recover, the hero has awakened, and Tyia were by her side along with the other two children. They were happy to see her awakened. Tyia explained about how the town has change abruptly ever since the hero has gone into rampage, changing it into a better town to live in and all the entire bad opposition lead by Richard has been pinned down. Speaking of the devil, she asked regarding of his location, and it seemed that the person has been missing ever since he has lose.

And cutting it to become really short, the children didn’t come with Tyia and the hero on their adventures, presumably because they are still too young and decided to stay on the city instead. The hero has an ambition of finding her father, and Tyia were also wanting to do the same.




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