Saturday 24 May 2014

Helferis Reboot.


Upon taken a hindsight to the older piece of work, I'd sensed various fault and am not happy at the pacing and the story line of the previous Helferis. It seemed so fast, and really unstable. Therefore, I will make a more ambigious and darker Helferis with a relatively managable speed. Some characters name will be altered and information would changed severely. This reboot has extreme changes and it woould be better that I ignored of the seasoned works..

I'd recently restarted this so, the first chapter isn't permittable for exposure online..It is not done at all..Ah, I'd posted it any way.. I divided each chapter into it's respectable arc just like in a manga, to avoid confusion and frustration. A single arc may have 3 to 10 chapters, though numbers are variable. Violence played a major role in my creation, as it is necessary for certain scenes and because of that, I will instilled the word "Bleeding" in every chapter and arc title. I had the epilogue finished a while ago, which is shorter than the old one and my first chapter woudn't revealed of what the world is really about. That would be a secret until later events..Of course, the main genre for Helferis is Mature, Psychological, Steampunk, Violence, Drama, Action and Adventure.By all mean necessary, this work of mine is only suitable for adult.


Reboot – Epilogue “Helferis”.
Darkness, madness, blood and despair. All were seen in a black battlefield. Death bodies scattered throughout the plain, and half had their bodies ripped apart and other has disemboweled stomach, letting their intestines visible onto the naked eyes.
The sky are dark as lead. Much of the stars to be covered completely by thick clouds that showered a heavy rain to the surface below. Explosion randomly occurred out of nowhere in a farther side of the plain, and once such area are focused into, one would saw an ongoing battle between two human. They are clashing swords, and sometimes their faces are more noticeable each time the thunder strikes. One is a girl and the other is a man. Each is young, sporting clothing of a knight. Their fighting arena is filled with corpses, and nothing else is happening apparently in their vicinity. Sparks formed whenever the wielded swords clash. As either look a lot like wanting to end this confront immediately, they jumped away from each other before running onto their target, and swayed a quick slash. Blood smeared in the air. These two are now behind each other’s back. The girl couldn’t maintain her weapon up high and fallen with it, only on the higher half. Her body was cut into two, and the leg also has tumble thereafter. Focus is aired onto the surviving young boy. He was breathing heavily, and stuck his sword to the ground and he is kneeing against the bloody land, while never letting go of his sword’s guard. No uttering of letter could be heard at all from him. Regaining the calmness, he looked upward and his eyes averted to the skies. Could be seen are nothing but black skies and heavy downpour. He couldn’t be faltered of it though, as he felt an encroaching tremor and looked at the other part of the battlefield and shocked to spot large pieces of ground starting to gathered on the air, forming into an unknown shape. His feet carried him upward, and he ran off toward the area that could get him closer to the source of the tremor with his sword in hand.


A lot of transformation was done. This is part of the 1st Chapter.

Chapter 1: Bleeding This Town.


It’s a very windy night. The tree’s branches are swinging and old leaves falling down to the grounds and staggered. Darkness has concealed the forest. There are four moons in the shape of a crescent noticeable on the black sky, each separated a few distance from one another and forming the structure of round. Its presence has generated a strong ray of light that helped highlighted a few part of the forest below that is mostly consumed by the creeping shadow. A traveler’s passage has the most visibility of all area, seeing that there are no trees in such section to block the moon’s light. Time cannot be determined but it assumable that it is quite late at night. Moving forward to a small clearing located somewhere in the seas of trees, a firewood is spotted, quite timid in fact is burning, resulting from the event that had happened once a few stick of wood is gathered at a single position and then, someone would light a match nor form a small fire in their palm and thus, set upon these set of stick an ignition, letting it burned. Quite far from the firewood, a figure is available. This entity is a girl, sporting a peculiar pink hair, pink eyelashes and who know, maybe a pink pair of eyes too. It shan’t be seen, since she is sleeping soundly. Despite not vividly easy for people to see, her apparel could be spotted. She is wearing a normal pair of black shirt and chocolate trouser, though it more likely to be an inside clothing rather than the main costume. Nearby, a faint light glimmered. White gauntlet and armor, alongside a sheathed sword and a skirt reinforced in a plate of thin armor colored white as well are arranged beside the aforementioned girl. The wind had calmed, and its cooling breeze sundered the girl in a deep slumber, until she evokes sleep talking.   
“Thought not for lesser tongue, naught learn of thy fate to come”.
Her soft, quite childish voice has embarked on the journey of discovery.
“Besieged by foul tempo and disturbances rated impossible, thou shan’t walk this world”.
She uttered these words oozing with weirdness, before stating another.
“And thy, cooked this potato soup for me… Hehehe”.
While she gave of a smug, her body rolled down the square shaped stones that she is sleeping upon that make a role as a mattress and subsequently, she has fallen.
Following the next morning, the sun has risen. Beautiful sound of nature is subjected for one’s hearing ears. Chirping birds, sound of streaming river, noisy crickets and all sort of variety belonging to the woods can be listened to. There’s even the sound of a rambling girl, as she walked through below the tall trees.
“I wonder why do I always kept moving around in my sleep. Next time, I would be sleeping on the ground”.
The daylight has enabled a full description for this anonymous entity. Has she put on the collection of armor that resembled a knight, with the sword that has a blue guard etched to the belt. She looked really beautiful, young and slender. However, her eyes aren’t pink but a blue. After passing through lot of trees, arrived thus herself in another clearing. Wearing of the expression of seriousness is quick to decay upon she has sight the origin of the sound of the flowing river.
“There’s a lot of river”, and so she speaks.
Route reaching downstream is attained from memorization. She make it there, and noticed a lot of fishes, either medium ranged to small are browsing through the crystal clear water. Some has hide once detected the girl’s approaching shadow as she get closer.
“They look very peaceful”, mentioned her with a calm look.
“It would make a good ingredient for breakfast! Ha!”, mentioned her with a combusted face worthy of being named as crazies.
Her right palm is pointed at the watery surface. Red orb began forming, getting bigger and bigger. Just as it reached the perfect size that really fit into the girl’s hand, it launched into the target. What occurred afterward is that, a lot of water started splurging into the air caused by the blast, and eventually it rained onto her, and fishes that can’t swim inland has scattered the river bank. Bigger and capable fishes easily made it back to the river immediately and swam away.
“Jeez, only a few are left. They sure knew how to run”.
She make a lazy dead fish eyes, grabbing the nearest fish afterward. Only 3 mild sized one were taken away, whilst the others are thrown back to their home. Scales and inner part are removed by a small knife that she carried and hung at the belt. Captured item are burned using the previous red orb that illuminated an object with heat once it is near enough and that girl took part by part of the cooked material and eat it with her finger without hesitation. 20 minutes are approximately used. She hastily ventured into the forest once more right after starvation no longer posed a problem. Lingered this girl was seamlessly without purpose for two hour, sometimes taking rest by leaning against a tree. Encountered wild animals undoubtedly flee for its safety. Finally, the traveler’s road was seen again.
“There it is. I shouldn’t ever take a sleep too far away last night because I didn’t even know my way around”, exclaimed the girl, portraying the lack of knowledge concerning of the route she’s taking.
Her head stared right and there, a small village is spotted in a glimpse. A large wagon is also heading there, as it is ahead of her on the road. Casually, she took a step wanting to travel to that location. Strong wind hindered the heat away and grasses are swaying left to right. White horses are used to pull the wagon that moved considerably slow. One man is sitting on top a saddle and another two is accompanying the party by guarding each side of the wagon.
“I wonder what are they transporting”, whispered the girl whom isn’t too far behind.
As they make progress across the road, a faint tremor was felt below the girl’s feet and so, she stopped walking.
“Something is underground?”
Her advancement was halted, though it isn’t the same for the transportation in front. The thing doesn’t popped out and attack the girl but instead, it headed straight for the larger object in front and make an appearance in front of the horses. It is a huge and tall, red centipede.
“A creature?! ”, mentioned the men on the saddle.
The horses are spooked, rendering instability for the rider and so, he fell to the ground. Such towering atrocity inflicted extreme injury for the fallen man by hitting itself to the target. He splattered to pieces like a pancake, splashing blood all over the wagon and the horses that are terrified to ran off ahead and can’t turned around due to the load it is pulling. Other guardsmen are showered in sweat already and throw away the sword they are carrying and run off beside the girl, not noticing she was there due to panicking. The event occurred really fast and she also decided to keep up the pace. Her feet carried her closer to the objective and there, she permitted a high jump and landed on top of the transport’s roof. Henceforth, she showed off her right palm again and minor electrical energy heed in vision, growing bigger than her hand before she released it. It shoot off shaping an orb, and upon contact with its target, a wave of electricity shocked the entire structure and the centipede exploded into unrecognizable bit soon after. Her mouth spoke off a minor claim.
“The charging of that technique wasn’t as swift as how that creature could move, so why didn’t it quickly attack me? I wanted to test my durability but it hesitated”.
The fleeing men were no longer detectable once she looked behind. The horses has calmed down. Unexpectedly, a voice has resounded, coming from below.
“Hey, you!”.
Mustered in maturity but still has youngish aura, the girl looked down and noticed a young man, probably being 19 years old. She jumped down and gazed upon this adolescent boy with the usual ordinary expression. He is fashioned with sharp nose, black cornea and hair, has strong muscular outline and is armed with nothing. Height from which he possessed is between 185cm while the girl was about 165cm. As an additional info, he wore a black trouser and draped in red cloaks that covered his body that is being put upon a black shirt.
“Weapon bearer, stand aside. I need to check what’s inside this vehicle”, asserted him inappropriately.
The girl doesn’t show any retaliation and instead, make it to the point.
“You are the one that summoned that creature to attacked this wagon, aren’t you?”. So she stated that with a common tone and look.
Overall, he tightened his lips, his eyes stared sharply and he was infuriated but it was only for a moment before he stood toward making his own route.
“Stand aside!”, retorted him, pushing his way through the girl’s left side.
She stayed in quiet monotone and watch the person opened the wagon’s door and inside, there was nothing else but large pile of bag. Her curiosity make her take a peek as the boy used his right finger to conjured a magic skill that enabled a short piece of laser to display, and he tore a horizontal line in the bag and golden coin started to pour away. Agitation tore him to make a furious look.

That's it, as of now..




   



 

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